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I'd appreciate any feedback on this short story extract! http://sta.sh/0mtuuaux54l
18 votes
Love it! 
Its decent, just needs a couple of tweaks
Sorry not my cup of tea
Any comments would be greatly appreciated! <3
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Does anybody know anyone who does animation commissions...
| 10 votes
- Yes (please comment with link)
- No
What attracts you initially to a story? Any comments wo...
| 34 votes
- Title
- Cover
- Genre
- Look of Characters
- Blurb
- First page
- Other
Christmas contest on my group :devPixel-Heaven: where y...
| 8 votes
- Oooh count me in!
- Sorry not my thing.
- I'll think about it.
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I think it's a pretty good story so far. When do you think it will be finished? I would like to read the rest of it 